Love ur poem. 5/5. speaks a truth that occurs to alot of ppl. keep writing

Aww..that is so sweet.
I can relate so much to this one - So, obviously I love this poem bunches. =) Meep.
The flow was flawless throughout the poem & the emotions were very clear. Fabulous write!
5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Aww, such a sweet write. I'm sure your friends appreciate your friendship loads.

"I've learnt how to live
holding secrets close to heart,
revealing only pieces
a burden hard to cart."

^ This stanza is my favourite, especially the last two lines.

"But with the help of my friends
and those who truely care,"

'Truely' should be 'truly'.

:}

That was so sincere and im pretty sure they would really appreciate ur sorry.. coz that was so sweet and ur had expressed those words very well 5/5

Beautiful poem... and wonderfully penned..

loved it...