Goran, i give this one 5/5 and the reason is not the poem but you, a person called GORAN....
What i,m about to say has nothing to do with me just an example....
Many of your great friends were around you in your birthday, many dedicated poems to you. many emails and phone calls, yet no response from you other than THANK YOU, yet you took time to write this for a person who was even late to say happy birthday, it mean you are a true lover, friend, and person who appriciate others. I have respect for you my dearest friend GORAN....
Thank you shela, and yes I DO THANK YOU FOR WHAT YOU AND OTHERS DID FOR MY BIRTHDAY and the prove was my MSN message yesterday. thank you all, yes this is special but still from the bottom of my heart i thank, you, Farah, Sonam, Freshta,Desi, and Silvia, and also the 67 emails i got from P&Q members.
Im going 2 say the truth about this poem n it is that ur poem was great 5/5
11 years ago
by bOlly danCer
no poem shud get the low voting coz every poem is writting for a damn good reason and every poem is writting by sumone who felt sumthing worth reading about...and i will giv it a 5/5 coz i believe that all poems shud be givin a great vote and be giving respect :) loved it goran.. bahoot aacha hai :)
Such a sweet poem even for a late birthday card/present. It shows you appreciate life and all things within it, it also shows that you appreciate your friends and family. I respect you for that.
Great poem by the way, 5/5 ...
I don't down grade someones poem. If I don't like it.. I put it in the comment.. and say the overall rating I think would be fit. I never actually rate the poem itself, I don't want to ruin your awards.. or anyone elses.
ANYWAY. with that said. This.. wasn't one of the best I have read.. but it wasn't the worst either. Better luck next time.
the heart joyful
the heart happy
you referr to it as the heart, rather than my heart when you used the word I throughout the piece. It didnt seem to fit. It was like suddenly you were talking about some random heart laying on the ground, rather than your own.
You said it made you happy, but you didnt show the reader the feeling. When writing poetry pretend the reader has never experienced something before and describe it to them.
Sorry if it sounds harsh, but I think you could have done better.
You are proving it how much you adore a simple sentence if it is from the girl you love, and it was so nice of her to remember you in this day, I hope now she knows your love is deeper than the ones Shakeaspeare always wrote about.Truly I mean it..