Comments : Late Happy Birthday

  • 11 years ago

    by donna

    Aww a very sweet poem.. I really liked it :] well done once again 5/5 xx

  • 11 years ago

    by shela

    Goran, i give this one 5/5 and the reason is not the poem but you, a person called GORAN....
    What i,m about to say has nothing to do with me just an example....
    Many of your great friends were around you in your birthday, many dedicated poems to you. many emails and phone calls, yet no response from you other than THANK YOU, yet you took time to write this for a person who was even late to say happy birthday, it mean you are a true lover, friend, and person who appriciate others. I have respect for you my dearest friend GORAN....

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Thank you shela, and yes I DO THANK YOU FOR WHAT YOU AND OTHERS DID FOR MY BIRTHDAY and the prove was my MSN message yesterday. thank you all, yes this is special but still from the bottom of my heart i thank, you, Farah, Sonam, Freshta,Desi, and Silvia, and also the 67 emails i got from P&Q members.

  • 11 years ago

    by X2892

    Im going 2 say the truth about this poem n it is that ur poem was great 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    5/5
    no poem shud get the low voting coz every poem is writting for a damn good reason and every poem is writting by sumone who felt sumthing worth reading about...and i will giv it a 5/5 coz i believe that all poems shud be givin a great vote and be giving respect :) loved it goran.. bahoot aacha hai :)

  • I don't know wat to say then you are an angel.............i do believe with all my heart that u are one..............

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Goran goran i actually enjoyed some of your poem unfortunately they are great for me.... thanks for always sharing your poets i truly appreciated from the buttom of my heart great job!5/5

    god bless!

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma Brown

    Such a sweet poem even for a late birthday card/present. It shows you appreciate life and all things within it, it also shows that you appreciate your friends and family. I respect you for that.
    Great poem by the way, 5/5 ...

    Love Emma xx

  • 11 years ago

    by angelmkc

    It's really a great poem. it's really nice and sweet poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I don't down grade someones poem. If I don't like it.. I put it in the comment.. and say the overall rating I think would be fit. I never actually rate the poem itself, I don't want to ruin your awards.. or anyone elses.

    ANYWAY. with that said. This.. wasn't one of the best I have read.. but it wasn't the worst either. Better luck next time.

  • 11 years ago

    by me

    Umm...well it wasnt really a poem but i liked it it was iight and it was sweet great job i give u 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow dude this is great I know whos your inspiration here lols you remember.. lols and hey i feel the emotion here great job it deserve 5 coz the true feeling in each line was there great piece

    Geneross

  • 11 years ago

    by Audrey

    You repeated birthday to many times.

    the heart joyful
    the heart happy
    you referr to it as the heart, rather than my heart when you used the word I throughout the piece. It didnt seem to fit. It was like suddenly you were talking about some random heart laying on the ground, rather than your own.

    You said it made you happy, but you didnt show the reader the feeling. When writing poetry pretend the reader has never experienced something before and describe it to them.

    Sorry if it sounds harsh, but I think you could have done better.

  • 11 years ago

    by desigirl

    You are proving it how much you adore a simple sentence if it is from the girl you love, and it was so nice of her to remember you in this day, I hope now she knows your love is deeper than the ones Shakeaspeare always wrote about.Truly I mean it..

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing and loving. I like it. Hehe. I felt the happiness in it Goran, very nicely done. :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a righteous poem dude. I like it. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    This one was good, but I thought that it could have been better. *4/5*

    Alyson

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Hey i loved it! i gave it a 5/5, not a 4. gee.

    5/5 always david