I like this. It's kind of like a twisted lullaby. Kind of sad.

I hope you write more soon :)

~Scarlett

...Sad...and pretty...Not exactly something I like but it's interesting. The beginning was well done and nicely tied into the others. So then there's the part with the "goodnight" that really captures attention.
~Faith-less

I really like this. It's sad, and really well written. I think it flowed flawlessly, and your emotions were expressed very well. The only thing i think might sound better, is in the third stanza, second last line:
A girl can only take so much
Let me downs.

I think instead of much it should be many. Just a thought. Very good poem though, please keep writing, your very talented. =] 5/5

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Love this poem.
Quite dark. M'm. Good.

Take care. Ly.
N-G-C-S.