Comments : Gentle roses.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Such lovely words than you

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Beautiful. Nice imagery, cadence and wording. I believe this is the first I have read of yours that didn't have a specific rhyme scheme. I liked it a lot, but specifically these lines:

    Though we can imagine, we may meet again
    It is improbable just as fate brought us
    Together, it has taken us away...

    Overall a very superb piece of work. I look forward to the next one you do. :)

    Kind Regards,
    Luna

  • 17 years ago

    by Kimmaly

    Can I just tell you, you are one of my favs on here. I love your words and how you express you feelings. I'm just a beginner but hats off to you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very well written, I like how a Rose become a symbol of a soul/life, and by kissing its kinda a touch of gentleness/tenderness that warmth anybodys heart.
    Lovely write.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Very wild imagination and great subject also and great message are you trying to put across I love the symbolic and the flow of the story of the poem very nice penned and beautifully created Great job

    Geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Spence

    I loved the overall flow of the poem, great read indeed. Robert.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueMoon

    I love this !

  • 17 years ago

    by Kali

    Absolutly amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Faust

    LOVE IT (I AM A SUCKER FOR POEMS THAT INVOLVE THE WORD ROSE)

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    I l0ve the detail and the way u wrote this poem xx

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I love reading your poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    BEAUTIFUL WRITING!!! You are very talented, you were so detailed and made the poem flow. Wonderful job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Awww!!!!! This poem is extremely beautiful! I loved the beautiful picture of romance you have painted here, The love in this poem is so strong that it pulled me all the way in and knocked me off of my feet. I love this stanza:

    So my darlings take this gentle rose
    Press it to your lips and caress it
    As You caressed me, so I can see and remember.

    This stanza made my heart skip beats. The words are so innocent, but yet they are very powerful words. The flow of this poem was just amazing. i actually got butterflies from reading this poem. lol. I think this is one of your greatest poems. You have excellent talent. Keep up the great work! 5/5 I wish that I could give you a higher vote for this one, but I can't,

    Best wishes
    Letty