Comments : Tears Whisper {Double Etheree}

  • 11 years ago

    by katie!

    Luanne,
    What can I say, Each time your poems amaze me, and I am like a broken record because they are so good! Thank you very much for writing! I love reading your work, and it is a pleasure to read! This was beautifully written, very descript, I felt as though I could understand the sadness as well.

    Well done, you always convey emotions so well in poetry!
    Keep it up my friend!
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Letty

    This is so beautiful. At first it seemed a bit confussing because this is my first time reading a poem like this. But You have me very interested in reading more. This poem is amazing. You've proven yourself as a being a brilliant poet. Keep up the wonderful work. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bravo. Very well done on this one. The emotional pull powerful.

    Great job.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 11 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Congrats on poem #100 Luanne, the last 5 lines ring out in my mind. This is a poem that will stay with the reader for a very long time. Timothy r

  • 11 years ago

    by Reborn Rival

    You should write a biography on a serious note! The world needs to know what an amazing mind and heart you have 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexis

    What a wonderful poem! It shows so much depth of emotion and I am in awe of you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Tears
    whisper
    on my cheek
    pink tainted trails

    ^I love this opening Luanne, it reminds me of one of my favorite painting.

    While I enjoyed the whole piece, the second half was my favorite, it flowed so nicely and touched on thoughts I have had myself.

    Great write!