Nice flow and content. Some words could have been a touch better. It was not something that I particularly liked but it was good. Not mind-blowing but nice. The way it unfolded came to a great ending. It was a different perspective on a similar theme. The 7-8 stanzas were my favorites. Something about them stood out to me. It's a cool write.
~Faith-less

Dont you just hate boys!!! there are plenty out there who dont have a clue how to treat us but there are those ginuwine guys who treat you better than you can ever treat yourself and yeah guys never notice the girl who loves them with all their heart and who is crying their eyes out...hey u'll find ur guy on day who treats u how u need and deserve to be treated!!!=)
5/5