I like it...gee that sounds lame as hell, lemme try again: It paints a beautifull picture of love that is really new cause you dont usually write about these sorts of things. its really intense. yeah thats it
write your next one soon damnit lol

Your a great writer!
5/5
xoxo-am

Wow, what an awesome poem!! Its more that words can speak its self, its..its I dunno but its amazing and you seriously have a great talent in you, Your words are really good with describing...-gets ready to read more- great job!!
xoxroxyxox P.S keep up the brilliant and awesome work!!