WoW~ I love the idea of the contest!
and the poem is very beautiful!
very great work on it huni
keep it up

I've no comment but this "WONERFUL"
Best Of Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxxx

Woah. Sweet poem first of all.
But really was an amazing poem. Such great word usage and discribtion and woah.
I read it with speed, Felt like that type of poem that you can just read over and over and find something new each time. Understand it better, looking deeper than the simple message. Really loved it =)

I coulndn't get past the role reversal for rhyme:

Once pen and paper approached shaky hand.

Freckled face appeared on rosy red cheeks,

they do not sit well with me at all and it is clearly apparent they are only written as such for the rhyme aspect.

Apart from those two lines it's a good effort. Diction, punctuation and time have been put into it.

Bret

Hehe I feel sospecial Nat nat!

Alright I got that out of the way : ) I really do like your poems though you know especially because you choose words that not only make sense but sound great all at the same time and I love your imagery as always. lol You actually got me and not many people do.

Wow! This is a great poem! I loved the word you used throughtout it! Really made the poem sound great! Keep writing because this is absoulutly fantastic! xx

Wow. I loved your word usage! It was so very well done. And I liked this whole topic a lot. Very unique.

[Once pen and paper approached shaky hand.]
^^I don't know why this seemed to pop out at me the most, but it did. I like the details you went into to describe how it is to write a poem. Well done. =) xoxo

Samantha

Very well done. YOu really capture the readers attention and put them into the scenery of what you're getting to. You're a very talented writter.
5/5 Keep up the great work!

God Bless,
Taylor

Great use of words very well written xx

Wow, a very good write. Your flow was amazing, as well as your vocab. A variety of words always makes a poem sound better, as you just proved. Keep it up. You have amazing talent. =] 5/5

I found this poem very confusing, but it was still a good read. I love the third stanza, though. 5/5.