Well done, a great message, flowed well and i enjoyed it.
xxxxxx

Typos: "sea" should be "seem"
"were" should be "we're"
"with-out" should be "without"

Sorry, had to get that part over with. All together, this poem is quite good, especially for being so short. It has an unique, interesting meaning, which is the most important part of a poem. But the flow is a little off and the word choice could be better. Nice ending, though!

Sorry-- I made a typo when I was writing your typos lol.

Correction: "Seam should be "seem".

Great poem!

I didn't think flow was intentional, so I won't say that there is no flow. =P

This is clearly a very well written poem. It had emotion, and reminds us that love is around us and that we learn from mistakes and such. Very good read. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I think that the thought put behind this was very deep. I didn't think love being around us, even when we aren't in love was true. But you showed me that it is. A great write. Keep it up. =] 5/5

I totaly agree. This poem is true!. 5/5!
Thanks for the comment it was greatly appreciated!

God Bless,
Taylor