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Again you have penned a beautiful piece. You are a very talented writer. I think that this poem was perfect. There is really nothing else that I can say. 5/5
by Simple Sensation
Wow! I really like this poem. It had short 2 word lines which i really liked becuase they were so meaningful. A great read! Keep it up! xx
This was very creative. I like how you started the first two lines in each stanza with the same word. Short but sweet. I loved it.
by Lauren Crandall
^ cool word. =]
I love this poem. its one you oculd read over and over and over and not get sick of it.
i loved the short stanzas and your vocabulary, and metaphors. great job.
Awwww. That was a very nice poem!
Keep up the writing you're good at it!
5/5 God Bless
by Italian Stallion
Short lines, but gets to the point fast, I like it. maybe you could've been a little more descriptive, but overall great job.