Comments : I'm going now

  • 11 years ago

    by Letty

    Again you have penned a beautiful piece. You are a very talented writer. I think that this poem was perfect. There is really nothing else that I can say. 5/5

    Letty

  • 11 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! I really like this poem. It had short 2 word lines which i really liked becuase they were so meaningful. A great read! Keep it up! xx

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was very creative. I like how you started the first two lines in each stanza with the same word. Short but sweet. I loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Havoc
    ^ cool word. =]

    I love this poem. its one you oculd read over and over and over and not get sick of it.
    i loved the short stanzas and your vocabulary, and metaphors. great job.

    x3 Lauren

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwww. That was a very nice poem!
    Keep up the writing you're good at it!
    5/5 God Bless

    ~*tay*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Short lines, but gets to the point fast, I like it. maybe you could've been a little more descriptive, but overall great job.

    Peace, Joe