Comments : Into My Head

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked thsi poem. It was sad and disturbing, made me wake up, you know. It was really well written.
    Its a good quote, pretty deep, and the poem really made this quote mean something.
    keep writing

  • 10 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow! amazing work!
    Wow!!!! i honestly dont know what to say! brilliant poem!
    i like the last stanza, well done!
    Your rhyming was great and the flow was perfect, i honestly wish i could give you more than 5 for this one.
    10/5

    `Murder.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. The last stanza was amazing, I loved the metaphor there.. Tell your friend that that is a great quote. You really did well on this poem, the flow was pretty good, the descriptions and rymes worked well and the emoiton was strong.. Nicely done sweetie 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wow... amazing poem!!!
    the flow was amazing... umm... i dont really know what to say!!!! they way you wrote it,,, i mean WOW!!! 5/5 and not lower than that at all... i really dont know what to say!!! i am speachless... really!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Nicholas

    Awesome poem. Loved the wording

  • 10 years ago

    by Alexis

    That was a very good poem even though it was about death i absolutly loved it! It was also sad but very good i love ur "quote" 2!

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not too bad... I'll be honest, it is very cliche and the flow was off. Those are probably why it got downvoted... But, I'll give it a five since you helped me. To improve: Don't go for cliche rhymes, and read it to yourself outloud; make sure it doesn't seem broken. Good luck.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a great poem i loved it.

  • 10 years ago

    by kaylee

    I really like it

  • 10 years ago

    by Cinthya

    I liked it it wuz hot

  • 10 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Like it? I dont like it, I LOVE it!
    Its... I cannot even explain.
    Its wonderful.

  • I loved this poem. It was so differant, real and i really like it! Have Fun!

    lol♥ xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Very very powerful.
    It was unique in certain ways and you put in that quote perfectly.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Scott

    I really like that you portrayed your emotions very well!

  • 10 years ago

    by jamie lynn

    Loved the poem very good 5/5 there is a lot of emotion iget form the poem witch makes the writing better

  • 10 years ago

    by Bullets Are My Best Friend

    Really good have a look at mine see wa u think

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is such a heart touching poem..i think that its great 2 read when ..well anytime!

  • 10 years ago

    by rocker666chick

    Love it please read my poem My Heart it would mean a lot to me I give this poem a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by lindzy

    Good poem, i really liked how well it flowed

  • 10 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    O MY GOD, THAT WAS SOOO GOOD