I'm glad she asked you, it's a really nice poem. Well done!

Ooooo I really liked this poem, Very dark. Great job 5/5

HEY!!
THIS WAS A GREAT POEM!! iT iS SAD BUT VERY GOOD AND TRUE... KEPP UP THE GREAT WORK HUN!
-BRiTTANY-

Hey its so amazing and sad at the same time hope we can talk more about this and u sound like a good person.....leave me a comment on my poems later

Awesome poem! The quote that it was based off of is great...in a sick and demented sort of way. Anyway, I loved it!

Its a really good poem !!

Thats pure brilliance!!!!

WOW. that poem was awesome but i hope it doesn't come true.. it's wicked

Hey, sorry it too me so long to wb, thanks for asking me, and yes you can submit the poem, who am i to stop you? really the end 2 lines sound abit too like mine, but ill get over it, the rest ismostly your own. and its a brilliant poem, let me know when you've posted it and ill vote and comment!

love always Steph

I used that same bullet quote in one of my older poems...it was in a song at some point...the name of the band isn't coming to me though...

You are a phenomenal writer, and this is only your second piece of poetry that I've read. It was a good choice to add you to my favorites. This is amazing. The rhythm and beat exemplified what you were trying to get across. I think you're the best poet I've read on this site.

Well-written piece. A lot of emotion and hard feelings but an excellent poem. I love it. 5/5

>black&&blue

Another favourite.
I hope you never stop writing.
My favourite part was the last stanza, it was so powerful it blew me away.

Awesome i loved this poem. keep up the great work. 5/5

[My heart you broke.
My soul you ripped.
You sent me tumbling,
into this script.]

i love this part.... i love the whole thing this poem was catchy, and well written, the flow made it even more enjoyable to read....5/5

That was quite good i really enjoyed thats the way i feel sometimes hopefully you dont 5/5

WOW THIS WAS A VERY GOOD POEM...VERY POWERFRUL 5/5 KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITE!

Great poem we love it but are you talking about your life or just making it up on the spot cause it's good

Wow i loved it! another wonderful heartfelt poem, great job 5/5

Wow! I love how you write your poems. The last stanzas always get me. Great job with this!
5/5

This one was actually very well written. It seemed to me some lines were forced.. but all in good name, I suppose. Not so many harsh things I can say about it.. good work. 4.4/5