Comments : The Evil in my Veins

  • 11 years ago

    by ellewen

    I can understand it. I have been there. You almost took those words from my mouth they are the equivilent to what I am going through. Its nice to know someone else has been there too.

  • 11 years ago

    by anna

    I can relate. great job i could feel your emotion and the pome flowed freely. keep up the awsome job =)

  • 11 years ago

    by bubbles

    Wow! that was really good...nice use of your emotions.keep up you good work..5/5!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Again nice flow. Your the simplicity of the words you use make the poem even more powerful. I liked that a few of the lines were monosyllabic too :).

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is me all the time. Trying to be good but evil is always gnawing. Great write. Added to faves.

    • 1 year ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Reading it now - another poem I'd completely forgotten, but rather enjoyed - it could easily be understood as a mortal becoming a vampire. Thank you, Mel