Comments : Write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenie

    Whoa!!!!! im soooo in the same place as u!!!!!
    but this was a good poem
    5/5

    jenie

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Very good poem. though it confused me at first. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was a little confusing. I think you could have explained what you mean a little clearer, and the ending seemed a little forced. However, this was a really good try, and even though it wasn't as clear as it could be, I understood where you were coming from.

    Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I know the feeling...you want to write something special, maybe for that person you have your eye on, but it just won't come out how you want it to.
    In the second stanza it should be "write" instead of "wright."
    I liked this, very truthful.