Comments : My Star

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I really like this. Clever structure. Nice flow. My favorite part was

    "Razor of light
    Stars of mine
    Grasp my heart
    Never die"
    Great imagery in this part. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...I haven't read anything of yours in awhile...and yeah this is the flow of it.

  • 11 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)

  • 11 years ago

    by kkly

    Is it me??

    i am ur star :P

    hehe.. sweet one again juls..

    I should start writing back!!
    but no one want to,so ill stay back! lol

    keep it up friend of my dreams,
    so far from my heart,
    you keep walking inside,
    those feeling I never wanted to have,
    you took them away,
    now its my time,
    to be honest,
    you are the greatest friend,
    someone can have!!

    i miss talking to u...


  • 9 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I love it its beautiful poem