I think this style of poem would be difficult, and you wrote this really well. Your word choice is always powerful and full of meaning, this is especially shown in this poem. I don't understand why the votes are so low, but i give this a 5/5 Great write!

Tammie xo

I was always fascinated by your formed poetry. Another good poem Nat, I don't really have much else to say on this one.

Wow, it may be old but it's still a very good poem. I personally love the form of the poem, it's a form you don't see very often. The vocabulary in this one was amazing too. You're a very talented writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Wow that was great 5/5 keep it up.