Comments : Breath Of Love

  • 11 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. Outstanding job! Keep up the great work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    "You have come again to haunt my dreams
    And pull back the covers of my heart."

    You has some beautiful imagery here.
    Really gorgeous.

  • 11 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    How refreshing it is to read something in this category which I would consider completely original. You use of words and the way you pieced them together made this a beautiful read. Truely touching. Thanks for sharing this.
    Oh and thanks for the comment on my poem.
    Take care,
    Silver J.

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is very well written, the imagery is very good and the meaning is deep. "how long the breath of love has lay dormant" really amazing. Excellent write 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! your words just drew me right in to this piece. Excellent!

  • 11 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautiful, sad piece. I love the imagery throughout. Enjoyed reading it.

  • 11 years ago

    by dandy

    This is such a captivating poem. What incredible imagery! Lately I find myself taking that same lonely journey, what feels like way too often. Thank you for your comment and I will definitely be reading more of your writing. Best wishes for the New Year,


  • 11 years ago

    by Courtney Chumley

    I like that. I understand it. It was about a love that was once taken but has returned and is welcomed like it was never gone.. You are a fantastic writer.

  • 11 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A very vivid dream you have there. I like your line about her pulling back the covers of your heart. That was truly beautiful. This poem was very well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by Corinne

    Beautiful, romantic and spiritual. A lovely poem Tom

  • 11 years ago

    by john graver

    Very good write. i enjoyed reading it. nice word selection.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful imagery. I like the metaphors. Nice job.5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LuCkYgIrL0409

    I love this poem!! your words are so deeply placed. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to read more.

  • 11 years ago

    by kimara4955

    Your poetry is beautiful, i enjoyed reading your poems, and hope to read more, when i read your poetry i see, fell, hear, smell and taste everything.
    thank you for the lovely comment. i hope you leave more and any tips you have for me.
    you are an amazing writer 5/5
    xx take care xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady

    Very nice!! thanks for the visit!!

  • Wonderful flow,
    I like how this is written.
    I also Appreciate the comment..
    People like you have helped mold writers like myself..
    Once again,

  • Hello
    this was ur first poem i read and i honstly was amazed by it...its very passionate and excellent in everyway...
    i will be reading more of your poems and i shall comment as i go..
    by the way thanks for ur comment,,,,means alot to me

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wow. I can't even begin to describe how beautiful that was. All I can say is after I read this piece, I thought to myself "I wish I could write like that.."

  • 11 years ago

    by erely

    This is beautifully written

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Oh the love in this poem was amazingly real. it was magic and the effect it had on me was heart throbbing. well done and keep these excellent poems coming.

    5/5 David