Wow. very true and very moving i guess you could say. 5/5

This is a great poem, very well written. the only thing you can do is break the lines better,
for example, the first line should end after APART,
other than that it is a great poem, and 5/5 from me.

That's definitely an awesome poem. It's nice to get two sides of a story.

Good poem. i like it alot.
keep it up!! -calli.

Excellent! the flow is really good but i would have evened out the stanzas
great job!