Comments : BETRAYAL .

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think the last line should read
    come OUT strong...maybe it was a typo. This poem has strong feeling and it's a good write. I don't like seeing friendships end, but it was a well-done poem, and that's why I'm commenting.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    I love this one! I can totally relate to it! beautifully written! keep it up =]
    xx