Comments : Self Shattered

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Excellent 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl there was alot of emotion in this poem. very deep and powerful. a very touching piece. it was quite sad and i loved the words u used. very well written. thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Roy

    Hey !
    thanks for your comment to start off.
    I loved this poem ! exactly the type i like to read,.. filled with sorrow,.. and perfect riming sceme,..
    i liked "And any day now, she will shatter deep inside
    From herself she has no true place to hide" i can partially relate to this poem.
    so a 5/5 i'm giving you.
    Keep on writing, so will i
    Roy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    "And any day now, she will shatter deep inside
    From herself she has no true place to hide"
    i loved those 2 lines especially =]
    Really good poem =] quite abit of emotion in there too
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Untitled

    I love this.So deep and dark.Words so powerful, very well chosen. Deserves a 5/5

    P.S I'm very close to you in age and I put you in my favorites.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow so sad but really good,5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    This is so sad but so real. I’m sure a lot of people could relate to a lot of those feelings in there. i especially liked these two lines...

    It is so well written and is a perfect way to describe those feelings. Well done I love your work =)
    -em

  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Great poem!!! extremely emotional!! i luved it!!! keep up the great work
    5/5
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace