Comments : Christmas Treasure

  • 11 years ago

    by Breeanna

    I like the words you use and how you express yourself, most times i tell people for more emotion but you convay it well. not so sure on the endings =[ sorry. 5/5 again. good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this is another great one, it seems like you have so many memories with christmas, but a great descreption in this one, great write.
    5/5 again

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Another beautifully written poem . I loved the way you expressed the emotion in this . And for me ? I liked the ending(: There isn`t anything I would change, cuhs` this is a very well written poem . Great choice of words[: Loved it .

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Personally, I think that the ending was fine and I didn't find any rocky parts to it.
    I can tell that Christmas brings a lot of emotions to you.
    You had a great flow and wonderful vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    I really enjoyed reading your poem! I think it was perfect just like it is!

  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, another amazing write. I really liked it. I have to agree with Goran, seems you have a lot of memories of Christmas. Great Job overall.

    Peace, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by Shae

    Amazing poem!! I really liked this one too! Its really hard to pick a part to say is the 'best' cause its all great!! 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Whoa! poem poem poem. just so much emotion and description.

    bravo! 5/5 David