Another beautifully written poem . I loved the way you expressed the emotion in this . And for me ? I liked the ending(: There isn`t anything I would change, cuhs` this is a very well written poem . Great choice of words[: Loved it .
Personally, I think that the ending was fine and I didn't find any rocky parts to it.
I can tell that Christmas brings a lot of emotions to you.
You had a great flow and wonderful vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5