Good poem, excellent use of opposites and great and true poem. Welldone

Great poem, very talently written, keep it up, i will be back to read more.

I loved this, especially the imagery and the way you used oppisites.

Bravo....You have done such a wonderful job with this. You have a real talent and I love how you have put your emotions in this. Don't ever give up on your dreams and always just always be yourself. You won't disappoint if you live up to your own expectations and always strive to be the the best that only you can be. There is a little goofiness in all of us and this was a great way of showing that it's just life. Great Job here. 5/5

Good poem. I like the comparisons and contradictory sense of the poem. If that's a description of you, then you seem to me like a tough girl.