Happy Birthday Freshta

Nicely dedication to tell someone Happy birthday to them. Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5

~tay~

I thought this was great, though the grammar in it was off... just verb tenses and such. i liked the simplistic meaning of 'happy birthday' and the fact that its got some personal touches to it as well ( i.e.
So could see the change
Of my calender
Dec 21st
to say
freshta, Happy birthday.)

good job! just work on those verbs though=)

Another great poem. It was sweet of you to make this poem for your friend. Another 5/5. Thank you for r/r/c my poems:)

This is incredably sweet, i wish ppl would write me poetry for my birthday. I also loved the style in which you wrote it and the grammer used 5/5

Cute poem. short and sweet.