Happy Birthday Freshta

by Goran Rahim   Dec 21, 2006


As each second pass
I am awake,
To see a new day.
I am awake,
So could see the change
Of my calender
Dec 21st
to say
freshta, Happy birthday.
This new day
may bring all the fun.
your each day
maybe brighter than
the sun.

* To my dear friend Freshta. Please keep smile.

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  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Nicely dedication to tell someone Happy birthday to them. Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5

    ~tay~

  • 10 years ago

    by emmerz

    I thought this was great, though the grammar in it was off... just verb tenses and such. i liked the simplistic meaning of 'happy birthday' and the fact that its got some personal touches to it as well ( i.e.
    So could see the change
    Of my calender
    Dec 21st
    to say
    freshta, Happy birthday.)

    good job! just work on those verbs though=)

  • 10 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Another great poem. It was sweet of you to make this poem for your friend. Another 5/5. Thank you for r/r/c my poems:)

  • 10 years ago

    by shawn

    This is incredably sweet, i wish ppl would write me poetry for my birthday. I also loved the style in which you wrote it and the grammer used 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Cute poem. short and sweet.