Comments : Happy Birthday Freshta

  • 11 years ago

    by freshta

    Buddy this means alot.
    thank you very much, the best gift I could ask for.
    off course I will smile, lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by shela

    Hey you Freshta happy bday. I hope you enjoy your day tommorow, and thank you Goran. This shows your true friendship.

  • As simple as it was this poem i believe touched your freind very deeply and i as well wish her a very happy birthday...
    like always even though many of us don't know you personaly but your words prove wat kind of person you are....
    who ever you are, where ever you are...i feel like i know you from your words.......and in life its very hard to come across people like you....u are very rare my friend...

  • 11 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    I like it goran nice and simple it says everything 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryan

    That was very nice of you goran, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by blueknight

    Happy bday freshta and such a nice work dude 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Mousie

    God even this was amazing! you're just too good! lol. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Cute poem. short and sweet.

  • 11 years ago

    by shawn

    This is incredably sweet, i wish ppl would write me poetry for my birthday. I also loved the style in which you wrote it and the grammer used 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Another great poem. It was sweet of you to make this poem for your friend. Another 5/5. Thank you for r/r/c my poems:)

  • 11 years ago

    by emmerz

    I thought this was great, though the grammar in it was off... just verb tenses and such. i liked the simplistic meaning of 'happy birthday' and the fact that its got some personal touches to it as well ( i.e.
    So could see the change
    Of my calender
    Dec 21st
    to say
    freshta, Happy birthday.)

    good job! just work on those verbs though=)

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Nicely dedication to tell someone Happy birthday to them. Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5