Comments : Past The Stars

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow you really can tell you love the one this is written for. good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    The rhyme is excellent, its such an orignial authentic piece and its so sweet. i can tell you spent time on this making it perfect. i love this piece. cant wait to read more.


  • 11 years ago

    by TaNyabAbEE

    Wow!! this is good. you must really love this girl. keep showing your love, it's good. and keep writing, cuz this is awesome!!:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sasha

    Nicley written