Crimson Traces [CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme]

by Elynnka   Dec 31, 2006


Sapphire tears sparkle on her ashen face in the pale moonlight,
An endless flow of torment that occurs seemingly each night
For what wretched causes only her jaded heartbeat can know…
How many demons she had to bear only her scars can show…
As the wind blows cold whispers of solitude she falls asleep,
Her frozen tears stand still ‘neath shadows of a willow’s weep.
A strange scarlet light shines in the forest, within silence’s keep,
Slowly embracing the lonesome girl - its clutch leaves marks so bright –
Her skin now gracefully mutilated by Cupid’s love bow
Bleeds room for hope and care - peacefulness is settled in her deep.

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The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consisting of one 10-lined stanza.
The rhyme scheme for this form is AABBCCCABC and a syllable count of each line is 15.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Very nice! Dark. Very catchy. You did really good on the layout, & structure of it. & I've never heard of this time of poem, but it seems really interesting.

    Great job. Keep it up.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This is really chilling i loved this poem n think u did really well to stick to this structure, well done.