Comments : My One Wish That Will Never Come True...

  • Hey... i liked it but it wasnt like a poem dat had rhythm or a pattern but i know exactly where ur coming from:P

  • 10 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow! This is *gorgous*! The emotion leads you up to think that your happy, and then *BOOM* it's gone! This is amazing!
    5/5
    xoxo

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I honestly cried reading this, ur amazing at making up quotes/poems and i think ive rated everyone one of em a 4 or 5!

  • 10 years ago

    by UnSpokenPromises

    I absolutly LOVE this poem...its all i want. I just want a guy who's not there to play with your heart then break it once he's done. You don't know how many times i've cried at night thinking ill never have that I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE YOUR POEMS KEEP WRITING :)

    Greatest Appreciation,
    - sara

  • 10 years ago

    by UnSpokenPromises

    Thanks jessie, i keep my hopes up. i really like this guy but our reationship is hard to explain. im hoping for the best of things :)
    Keep writing,
    Always♥
    ~*sara~*

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Yeh..i read all ur quotes too, and cried on a few! but ur quotes and poems AMAZE me sooo much, ur really good! keep it up! and i hope ull get better with ur whole relationship dealy! kk ttull
    **steph

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is so... wow. I really red it thinkin: aawww hot cute! ^^
    Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    Hot = How xD