Southern Charm. Good Poem. Rhymes need to be structured in a better way. Title... could be changed into something better. when you read the title. its like an insight to your poem. it says something Happy! grateful! but when i read your poem. its tragedy. Something really upseting... Find a better title! Good poem. Loved the Beggining. the end became stale... but its a good poem. voted 4/5