Ciao Fredaeya, sounds very good, make it a little bit longer but its still good, 5/5!!!, thanx for the comment on my poem,

I really liked it. Good word choices. Great job!

I like it!! Good flow, keep up the awesome work, and thanx for the comment on my poem!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Great poem! I can relate. Thanks for the comment. keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more of your poems.
Kasie

I loved the feel of that one.

Really nice..
thanks for ur comment

I love it...simple ...but meaningful....one to which i think everyone can relate! keep it up! and thanks for the comment:)

This is really cute. Short..but its really sweet how it rhymes and everything. i like it! =] 5/5

I really like this poem keep up the good work
-teardrop

Dang this poem is good .. really .. and thanks for the comment on my poems .. :D

This poem is so cute! Gr8 work!

Its got a very nice rhythm something I need to learn!