'forever a great poet and i know you know it'
hehe made that up on the spot and it describes you perfectly no matter what this idiot did to you atleast everybody who reads your poems knows this
you are worth more than a 1 becasue you a worth more than a 5 lol
but i really dont see how you were your own murderer but it doesnt matter because this poem is great
and i luv the beat that was in my head when i read it
definetly a 5 i wish i could give it more

Its called sucicide. thats half murder.

but i wont backstab myself cause then i am hurting maisy. and i cant. ever.

but i think, hmmm. i have already. gee. meh. i wrote a poem to her that in some ppls minds is poor.

so meh.

david

I thought it only mattered what she thought of it did you ever ask her what she thought of it becasue im sure she would luv it and seriously dont let other ppl get to you it only matters what you and maisy want
ive given up on what people think about me because i was sik of wht they thought about me and i realised it only mattered wht i thought about myself so if some freak wants to be an idiot let them because a thousand other people luv your poems especially the one about maisy (sorry if i spelt her name wrong) take encouragement on all the great comments you have and if you believe your poems are great just lyk i do then who really cares about these idiots

Yer you got the spelling right. i now don't care wat they think.

from now on i will keep records on all my poems, over night. see wat ppl vote. go the maths. lol. i now have found a reason to love maths. lol

i know kiara. thanks a heap. i am fine now. got over it all. just who cares if they give me a 1. i will just care who gives me the 4 and 5s. and return em back to them.

i have to comment on a few of your poems. and if you see how many votes you have now i will vote on them all. i know they are all great so i will just give em all 5s.

as repayment for all your encouragement.

David

Ouch! David, couldn't you make it less vivid?

Marjan

Wow!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!! i love it!!!!! ..... great emotion...so deep..wow.. excellent job! 5/5.....ur a great writer. i love all of your poems.

This poem is amazing, u know it!! i love the words you used, made me feel it as i was readingit... kinda scary, but i love it anyway! great job! 5/5!

*Shawte*

I like the style in which you wrote this. The storyline is intriguing too. I wasn't expecting the ending. As usual, another excellent poem by you, glad to see them still coming. =] 5/5

Tammie