Comments : With Him I'll Forever Be

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very heartfelt and full of emotion. Nice flow. It was sadly beautiful. Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    I love this one Cindy cos although it has a sad undertone because the character is leaving the world, she is finally able to be with the one she loves and that in itself, it just beautiful
    I love it...
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is very beautiful cindy, i feel the emotions in the poem, great flow, the 5th stanza is my fav, another 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done Cindy, sad but beautiful. True love never dies!

  • 10 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Nice poem love it could u comment mine ok thank u well later

  • 10 years ago

    by dora

    Hey there was a lot of emotion coming through in this poem. it was beautifully written. a very touching piece xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing.
    Sad, yet so beautiful about wanting to be with the person you love.
    Wow, the whole poem was just amazing hun and it couldn't get any better.
    Flow was great and your wording was perfect.

    The time has come, you say,
    No longer will I wait,
    You have come to lead me,
    To heaven's shiny gate.

    ^^ My favorite stanza. Don't know why, it's just struck a chord with me. Wonderful job overall hun! Keep it up! 5/5

    Take care & stay strong! =]
    Stephanie Lynn.

  • 10 years ago

    by izzy

    *speechless*

  • 10 years ago

    by FireCracker

    I LOVED THIS ONE! AWESOME JOB!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by FireCracker

    I LOVED THIS ONE! AWESOME JOB!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    Although this is sad, It's not in a way. Like, knowing that it's something that you want, that you will be with this person, it sounds nice. But i don't mean that in a bad way.. It's hard to explain what i mean. Great poem though. =]

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Hey Cindy,
    Again another awesome poem. So much power and emotionbehind your words, leaves me breathless.
    So sadly beautiful.
    Love your dear friend, Tara-Kay
    xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by channing

    OMG THT WAS SOO GOOD

  • 10 years ago

    by nakita

    Awhhh! i loveee it!

  • 10 years ago

    by nakita

    Awhhh! i loveee it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    This was a very good read! Enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelso

    O my this poem is so sad it brought tears to my eyes . i really liked it tho.
    5/5. keep writing.
    **Kelsey**

  • 10 years ago

    by lilmissEmo

    That is the best poem i have read in a long time

    amy

  • 10 years ago

    by ashleigh barns

    Lovely words this peom is very touching.
    ashleigh

  • 10 years ago

    by Barry

    Pure love is limitless