Vry touching, ur so talented pls keep writing and comment more of my stuff PLEASE thnxs

lissa

I like this and you did good putting your self in his shoes

This is a really good poem..yea i sord of know how you feel b/c my uncle is in iraq...stay strong and take care

Wow!!
i really like that.
i havent had someone close to me go over to Iraq or anything but i do believe that this is a really powerful poem you have made in honner of all of those who have had ppl go over there.
i love it!

--Samy

Wow really moving

My dad just died in iraq last year.

Thanks for reminding people that we still are at war!

Jennings

Wow that was really good. my sis has a friend whos mom is in iraq.

I thought that this was a really great poem......