Comments : Homesick tourist

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence


    Kenneth you make me a very very very happy girl!

    I loved this poem before and I love it even more now I saw the title and screamed with delight haha

    Your style is astounded and your words a wonderfuly strung together.

    I hate you haha I demand you write a cr-ppy poem xD

    I miss you and love you lots and lots.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked this one, the first 2 stanza's some lines seemed too long, and when i read this stanza, I knew I loved it

    A semi-darkness has begun to arrive outside
    longing to reach me, impatient and strong.
    I pull down the blinds and pack my bags in hope,
    a hope so lost, well, I now realize, this is where I belong.

    you have talent,
    well done

  • 11 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    You have a compelling way with words. You just carry the reader along effortlessly and I want to read more...
    I feel useless as I have no critisism to give, and I always give some suggestion is keep writing. I'm adding you to my favs, glad you chose to read my poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well. I liked your usage of words, and the story behind this was brilliant. I haven't really seen a poem like this before. Some parts I understood, and well some parts I didn't. All around it was a great poem though!

  • 11 years ago

    by Marjan

    My favorite lines were these :

    It's early afternoon and I stare outside
    waiting for something to happen, just to comfort me,
    maybe the contour of a known world that hasn't died.

    I liked the way you had expressed your thoughts here :) thank you!