Moving. Truly moving. I think that is probably one of the best poems I've read in a long time. Honestly you hit the nail on the head here. Killer job.

5! this is a good poem and ur sooooo sweet = )

Wow amazing stuff very impressive, keep it up pls comment, great jobb

lissa

Wow, i absolutely adored this. it was so good. i loved how you wrote your feelings about your girl like that. it was just so good. and thanks for the comment on my poem.

It's great ... i loved it .. it's so true :D great job ..Keep it going`

Thi9s is soo sweet you are a good writer keep writing the most intense emotions seem to cause a more artistic behavior
i write when i am mad and sad and when i long for love like my boyfriend