DEFINITELY dont take this poem off the site - I thought it was lovely. Good use of language, the flow was great, the rhythm was continuous and it worked well. I suppose sometimes good poems like this get missed because there are so many on this site!!! Its not a reflection on your writing skills! Keep at it. 5/5

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Damn... I feel the same way poeple say iv changed to how can we not when things get so bad.. 5/5

Really great i enjoyed it