Comments : Almost.

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This is the poem about addiction
    i have ever read. Its like you are right
    beside on friday watching and reading
    my mind, I can't believe how much
    these words from a total stranger
    are mind words, thoughts and weakness. How is that possible? I'll
    read over and over. thanks cy

    P.S. read my i am your disease
    i hope you get something from
    it.

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    How can anyone read this and not put a 5/5 on it

  • 10 years ago

    by emma

    This poem is really really strong..
    thought provoking
    scary
    hard hitting
    well written
    amazing
    I loved it!
    emz .x.

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Not to put pressure on you but i
    i want you to know this poem
    is part of my recovery, i have the
    desire to want to get clean and i ll
    read until i memorize it. iam
    so sick and tierd of almosts in my
    life thats it im tierd of being tired

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    THIS will always be my favorite
    if someone reads this and don't
    give you a 5 then thier just
    crazy or thier taste is in thier mouth
    lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Jamica

    This sounds like I feel alot. Calling my name, begging me to come back, staring at me . I love this poem. Good sh--!

  • 10 years ago

    by beav

    Wow. cy told me to read this and i'm glad he did. fantastic work. personified addiction SO well. outstanding work! 5 for you!! -beav

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I wish i could almost make it , I CAN'T even get almost, IT's there
    now when im awake in my sleep
    even deep into my dreams its
    cocaine my life it seems. I CAN'T

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I can\'t stop, and the self hate monster is eating me alive, anyway
    this is what i do the day after cry
    like a b**ch, everything that happens
    to me is deserve, I JUST feel so bad
    for my family, what did they do to
    deserve this

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that is an amazing poem
    and now i see what many people
    i know feel like. comment my poem
    " look what you've done " if you get a chance
    wow this is simply amazing!
    5/5

    xx.chelsea.xx

  • 10 years ago

    by TWiStEDxElAGANCE

    This poem is amazingggg i knowwww exactlyyy howw you feel..... keep it up

    5/5

    NxF

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This poem is very good. it has alot of strong emtion. keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Powerfull stuff loved it!

  • 9 years ago

    by CWG

    Excellent poem that I can relate to so well. Thanks to God I am clean now but I remember the almosts and I was never strong enough to quit on my own. It took God's help. Definite 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by CWG

    I have several poems about addiction you may like if you get time to read them. I would appreciate any feedback. Thanks

  • 8 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow this piece was just so strong and powerful. i felt the exact same way with my heroin addiction. its a painful battle that never really fills you, i love the repetition of "almost like" because that is so true, its almost there but you never quite reach where you want to be and with addiction the longer you continue to do it for the further it gets to being what you want it to be. well done on an amazing and powerful poem which really shows the unsatisfactory concept of addiction. 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by MartyrAmanda

    This piece is a complete thought process, and I love pieces like that. When you can feel the writer.
    The line 'knowing addiction is stronger than hope' is perfect, it says it all. I couldn't say it better myself.
    Addiction is a war that know very well. A war that I'm fighting, a war that I know I'm not alone in. And this piece is a reminder of that.
    So thank you.
    -Amanda

  • 7 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    Thankyou Amanda. If you need more, I can surely offer.