This is the poem about addiction
i have ever read. Its like you are right
beside on friday watching and reading
my mind, I can't believe how much
these words from a total stranger
are mind words, thoughts and weakness. How is that possible? I'll
read over and over. thanks cy
P.S. read my i am your disease
i hope you get something from
Not to put pressure on you but i
i want you to know this poem
is part of my recovery, i have the
desire to want to get clean and i ll
read until i memorize it. iam
so sick and tierd of almosts in my
life thats it im tierd of being tired
I can\'t stop, and the self hate monster is eating me alive, anyway
this is what i do the day after cry
like a b**ch, everything that happens
to me is deserve, I JUST feel so bad
for my family, what did they do to
Wow this piece was just so strong and powerful. i felt the exact same way with my heroin addiction. its a painful battle that never really fills you, i love the repetition of "almost like" because that is so true, its almost there but you never quite reach where you want to be and with addiction the longer you continue to do it for the further it gets to being what you want it to be. well done on an amazing and powerful poem which really shows the unsatisfactory concept of addiction. 5/5
This piece is a complete thought process, and I love pieces like that. When you can feel the writer.
The line 'knowing addiction is stronger than hope' is perfect, it says it all. I couldn't say it better myself.
Addiction is a war that know very well. A war that I'm fighting, a war that I know I'm not alone in. And this piece is a reminder of that.
So thank you.