Comments : Destroy me one last time

  • 10 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This could've used some rhyming, but sall good, cause you made it work!! this is short(that's not bad), and u still got your point across, great job!

    Forever*Yours

  • 10 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Well ken, this is a first but i liked it, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it, i think some rhyming should have been introduced to make it flow better but you did well and i enjoyed this one
    xxxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Yo, man! You decided to come back too, eh? :-P

    see ya at school..
    good stuff btw;-)

  • 10 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    I sense sacrasm a little bit in this. I like the style of it, it was different.
    I thought your choice of words worked well too.
    Thanks for the comment. The part about the flow (you know what I mean) that person says 9/10 of the poems she comments on have terrible flow, so i'm not phased by that lol. Thanks again.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mousie

    Wow that was really unique, i loved it, really a great poem, great flow, lots of power to it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Fighter

    Woow.... i had forgotten how mich i truly enjoy your poetry. you are talented... i mean seeeriously talented. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 10 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Uhm its definitally different then anything i've ever read. but uhm the flow is a little awkward. i think that you should take a little time to edit this poem b/c it has the potential to be good.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    This was very good. It makes totally sense. I liked it. This is absolutely a poem from the heart, well written. 5/5