This could've used some rhyming, but sall good, cause you made it work!! this is short(that's not bad), and u still got your point across, great job!

Forever*Yours

Well ken, this is a first but i liked it, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I liked it, i think some rhyming should have been introduced to make it flow better but you did well and i enjoyed this one
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Yo, man! You decided to come back too, eh? :-P

see ya at school..
good stuff btw;-)

I sense sacrasm a little bit in this. I like the style of it, it was different.
I thought your choice of words worked well too.
Thanks for the comment. The part about the flow (you know what I mean) that person says 9/10 of the poems she comments on have terrible flow, so i'm not phased by that lol. Thanks again.

Wow that was really unique, i loved it, really a great poem, great flow, lots of power to it 5/5

Woow.... i had forgotten how mich i truly enjoy your poetry. you are talented... i mean seeeriously talented. keep it up!
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Uhm its definitally different then anything i've ever read. but uhm the flow is a little awkward. i think that you should take a little time to edit this poem b/c it has the potential to be good.

This was very good. It makes totally sense. I liked it. This is absolutely a poem from the heart, well written. 5/5