And every bit of pain that hits me right in the heart.
Makes me stronger but weaker ever since we've been apart.
And I finish this poems with every tear that I cried.
Hoping some day you'll never say goodbye
thats beautiful imergery right there and such heart, I can feel your pain soking through,....amazing work. keep it up cant wait to read more and check otu my new stuff.
It's very rare to find a guy your age that can actually write a decent poem, but you, you have a better understanding than most. you know that it takes feeling and passion to do this. It really shows. i felt the pain in this and i could see a little image of everything you said. it wasn't of you, but of my past. (only with guys lol) It's very well written and i enjoyed it. Great job sam.