Comments : You'll Never Say Goodbye

  • 10 years ago

    by Kurt

    I thought this was a beautiful poem. The emotion behind the text allows the reader a glimpse at the events and creates a tone. Great write.

  • 10 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow deep, i like this one a lot, its unique great style here :)

    lissa

  • 10 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    And every bit of pain that hits me right in the heart.
    Makes me stronger but weaker ever since we've been apart.
    And I finish this poems with every tear that I cried.
    Hoping some day you'll never say goodbye

    thats beautiful imergery right there and such heart, I can feel your pain soking through,....amazing work. keep it up cant wait to read more and check otu my new stuff.

    melissa

  • 10 years ago

    by NoSurvival

    Ohh, wow!
    i know i havent read your stuff in a while.
    your still an amazing writer!
    i LOVE it!
    its super awesome!!

    --Samy

  • 10 years ago

    by CHRiSTiNE

    Man i love this poem JayJay this is my favorite:)

  • 10 years ago

    by XxItalianxXxBeautyxX

    You're really good at poetry.
    You never find many teen boys that write
    but great work.
    comment mine if you want
    GREAT JOB!
    Sami

  • 9 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    This is a great poem.
    Great choice of words,and perfect rhyme.
    I loved how you were able to keep flow and not lose the tone of the poem.

    Amazing job!

    -Kayla Kayy.

  • 9 years ago

    by amber

    It's very rare to find a guy your age that can actually write a decent poem, but you, you have a better understanding than most. you know that it takes feeling and passion to do this. It really shows. i felt the pain in this and i could see a little image of everything you said. it wasn't of you, but of my past. (only with guys lol) It's very well written and i enjoyed it. Great job sam.
    thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 9 years ago

    by Lulu

    Ur poems are amazing!!! u alredy know dat cuz ive told u b4 lol..but i dnt get tired of readin em over n over again lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Lulu

    Jay i LOVE ur poems! dey r sooo good!...i miss talkin 2 u!