Comments : Valentinite

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Yeah I call this feeling a dilema. Very nice poem I trully liked it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 10 years ago

    by shawn

    This was great, it truely was, so siple yet so deep, i know the feelings that the poem puts back into me and i am glad i have found a way to rid them, hopefully you will too.

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is written greatly with a nice style. i like the originality of this poem, great job.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Hey buddy...it been long time i did not hear you...perhaps you did not remember me...

    ken, this was beautiful sad penned you potray here, simply but well expression emotions...hopefully everything well with you, take care.

    bert.

  • 10 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Really wierd one dude:P but still quite fun to read;-)

    -Haggi

  • 10 years ago

    by Marjan

    I can’t say I got the meaning of this poem very well. but while reading it, it sounded like a good poem to me. I’d like to know the meaning behind its words.

  • 10 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Grreat job. i like the title but uhm there is one thing wrong. its gramatically incorrect to say moving in mono. because mono means 'as one' there for it doesnt fit. but im sure you could fix that.

  • 10 years ago

    by Faceless Mirror

    "its gramatically incorrect to say moving in mono"? lol

    I just have to ask you a question - ever heard of something called a metaphor?

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    I love the first line to this poem

    I'm colorless to white

    Idk what it is about it, but I just love it, splendid job my dear!! Keep up the awesome work 5/5!
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetical Princess

    Even though I didn't really understand this, I feel it had very vivid words that brought the feel of the poem out. Good work on the description ;)

  • 10 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Lmfao well done my love.
    missed your poetry lately.

    and your comment towards mono.. that made me laugh i love you

  • 10 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I'm colorless to white

    That line.. Gave me chills.
    Brilliant, mate. Even if "moving in mono" is a bit of an odd term. You did a good job though.. with the analogy.

    5/5