This one is great. The rhythm works well, and the rhyme sceme does as well. Good job.

Wow i can totally relate to this its awesome i can tell that you took time and effort on this and your feeling is awesome 5/=)

Great work hun, another great poem, I take it this was the same girl from your last poem too, and the poem I am about to read is titled to Michelle, so I'm taking a stab and guessing thats her name lol
keep your head up hun, who needs enemies when you have friends that lie right.

xoxo Lucy

A good poem and all the flow and all is good and an understandable poem also,
nessa

Amazing i've been backstabbed over and over again by people i trusted. thank you for rating my and commenting mine.

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5/5 iiF U NEEDA TALK U CUD PRiiVATE MESSAGE ME

BEHiiND DESE BiiG BROWN EYESZ
LiiES DA TEARSZ ii CRY

This one is soo good i can totlally relate to how u feel i hae been betrayed so many times and thats the rea i dont have bestfriends anymore!!! greart poem keep ur head up high!!