Comments : With My Two Hands

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Hey this poem was really nice to read. flowed well. and the ending was so loving.

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned dedication. I liked this one a lot. Great emotion.

  • 10 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Oh that is a really nice poem lovely written 5-5

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I really liked the second & third stanza . The promise in this is just ... wow . It`s sweet without being completely cheesy or totally ... cliche ? I think is the word ? But beautifully done (:
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow very nice and deep 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    That was amazing, definitely on my favorites now. It flowed very well and was a total attention grabber. It provoked thought on my part (some ppl say thats a miracle these days) as it struck me first as a mother's creed than later as if you were speaking as a nurse of some sort, all the while though displaying heartfelt compassion in every stanza. Really got enjoyment out of that one. 5 only because there is no 10!

  • 9 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Now this poem shows how much of a great person you are.
    This poem reminded me of a mother and a child. And how the mother would do anything for her child.
    I'm not sure if that is what you were getting at, but it is what i got from it.
    Whatever you meant, this poem is one you should be very proud of.

    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    In life there are rare chanced when someone think for someone...

    life is the name of hidden games. often i think that why there is so much rush of hate in the world

    its so nice that we think about someone and we want to do better for this world.
    i realy loved your poem. its great. if everyone thinks like you then im sure everything will be fine in world..

    my favourite stanza.
    With my two hands
    I will allow many to live
    A life full of happiness
    No pain left

    i realy fell in love with this poem. great great work 5/5