I really liked the second & third stanza . The promise in this is just ... wow . It`s sweet without being completely cheesy or totally ... cliche ? I think is the word ? But beautifully done (:
That was amazing, definitely on my favorites now. It flowed very well and was a total attention grabber. It provoked thought on my part (some ppl say thats a miracle these days) as it struck me first as a mother's creed than later as if you were speaking as a nurse of some sort, all the while though displaying heartfelt compassion in every stanza. Really got enjoyment out of that one. 5 only because there is no 10!
Now this poem shows how much of a great person you are.
This poem reminded me of a mother and a child. And how the mother would do anything for her child.
I'm not sure if that is what you were getting at, but it is what i got from it.
Whatever you meant, this poem is one you should be very proud of.