Comments : Not just a love letter

  • 11 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    I accept, dear Jack.
    I will love you forever.

    Few things:
    "If not for you then for me."
    --You should put a comma after you.
    "If only to spare you the pain or breathing."
    --'Or' should be 'of'

    I love you so much. Forever.

    --Lady Sorrow♥.