Great poem.
5/5

When Francis Scott key wrote "the bombs bursting in air"
he wasn't writing about pretty little fireworks with it's flare
I liked those two lines best (: Btw; the apostrophe in it's isn`t suposed to be there xD

Lincoln, Roosevelt, Truman, our hero's do not end there people
"Heroes"

I feltl ike a couple of the lines were too long near the middle, but it was still a good write . And the words spoken in this write; so true .
..__MiNDYY

I really liked this one, actually better that, fight for inependence! Very good David! kudos!

your slave also,
-Liz-
~luv ya bunches~

The title instantly caught my attention ^_^
You're right too. We often forget the true significance of holidays. 5/5

Another grea t write of your, anbd your so rigt, holidays are now alll about what people can get out of them, not about what started them
nessa

Thts awesome---i agree

Now this...this is amazing.
The meaning behind this piece was beautiful..imagery created was breathtaking, really created vivid pictures for me.

I thought the flow was good throughout except for "with britian lost many a friend."
It just sounds of to me. Maybe try With Britian, lost a friend?" or something similar?

But apart from that, this was beautiful.