Wow I have to say I know exactly how you feel with this one. I am going through the same thing. It is absoultly amazing at how you seem to be able to catch emotion in every single stanza. Some people write to write but you write to show emotion. Which is indeed felt within all of your poems. :-)
This is really good along with all of you others it reminded me of exactly how i felt everyday when my exb/f walked by me with his girl i'd prolly still feel that way if i still lived there.... very very good keep it up!!
You came very highly recommended for me to check out and i have to say, i'm impressed. this was a beautifully written piece. the imagery, emotion and depth, content, concept and flow all came together to create a truly beautiful read. filled with suci melancholy and hopelessness yes. but a beautiful piece of art nontheless.