Great job! I really enjoyed this write of yours. It is funny sometimes we can be around so many people and still feel so alone.

Time came to say good bye
My lips were locked for a second
I saw you last time and gone
I was so alone in your city

This stanza brought a tear to my eye. Take care friend
Cindy

This was very pretty and I found it very well written. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Thats such a sad poem, probably why its in the sad section, I hear your story honey, great work.
Thankyou for adding me to your favourites :) I shall return the favour.

Very good agn u know who to flow ur words good work....5/5

God bless u

Wow this is good. Any ways, you commented me on how to submitt a poem in a contest. Sorry, but the one I'm doing is for my high school, not the internet. I have no clue how to do one here.

Another great poem! I really liked the title of this poem and it caught my attention quickly, I just had to read it. I like the images this poem created, it was a beautiful scene. It had a sad ending, but it was still romantic and beautiful.

The stanzas are kind of weird. but it is a good poem. the wording is good and the flow is good.... 5/5

This was a good write but I think you had a bit more redundance then what you wanted. I tjink if youy stayed more to the point you work would have been more powerful. Your stucture was good bit you left a defeating taste in my mouth I think if it would have been a abit boulder your work would have really shined.

Ohh how does it feel to be alone in the city.. wow i love ur style....this really great message to everyone at it really touches my heart. it was so sad and i feel the great emotion. 5/5

This was really cute and at the end felt somewhat metaphorical...it was very nicely written and i liked how you repeated the title at the end of each stanza, it made it seem more powerful. This was very sweet and sad, loved it:)

Loved your work!..very well penned!
"Time came to say good bye
My lips were locked for a second
I saw you last time and gone
I was so alone in your city"
ooooo i loved these lines...so deep and touching!
Kp up de good work!
Xx Pooja xX

Pretty good. It could have been better if you tapped into your emotions more and used similies or metaphors and those kind of stuff. Also, bravery should be bravely.

Good job with a great story to tell,
i can relate to the part in which you are talking to the father but thinking about her, lol. it happened to me, i know how it feel

great job again.

Awhh. So deep and moving. I could picture it in my mind. XD. Wonderful.

The repetition thru out this poem was great. i found it made this poem more dramatic and strong.

5/5 David

Good job, but the flow seemed a little choppy ar partts, so you might want to clear that up otherwise it was great. 5/5

Well written, this poem had a great flow due to the repeation, the word choice was diffrent, but brillaiant, and the emtion was heartfelt and strong. Keep up the good work. 4/5

This is a great poem. I found the repitition of 'I was alone in your city' a little off putting. But thats just me. Other then that little thing it was great. 5/5

Kalee

Brilliant poem, so much feeling in it! 5/5!!!

It was a good read but you need to have an equal amount of lines in each stanza but besides that your poem has a great flow keep up the good work