Another great poem! I really liked the title of this poem and it caught my attention quickly, I just had to read it. I like the images this poem created, it was a beautiful scene. It had a sad ending, but it was still romantic and beautiful.
This was a good write but I think you had a bit more redundance then what you wanted. I tjink if youy stayed more to the point you work would have been more powerful. Your stucture was good bit you left a defeating taste in my mouth I think if it would have been a abit boulder your work would have really shined.
This was really cute and at the end felt somewhat metaphorical...it was very nicely written and i liked how you repeated the title at the end of each stanza, it made it seem more powerful. This was very sweet and sad, loved it:)
Loved your work!..very well penned!
"Time came to say good bye
My lips were locked for a second
I saw you last time and gone
I was so alone in your city"
ooooo i loved these lines...so deep and touching!
Kp up de good work!
Xx Pooja xX