Amazing, for this poem has great potential. it is as I say both unique and perfect!

5/5 David

Yeah! you're saying LOLZ.

you're such a tany tany tiny latin dancer.
but i kind of wish
that we were lesbians.

Bullshit.k?

Hehe...lovely poem dearie!

I have a quote site and i would love to put some of your stuff on there... I would of course give you credit and put a link to your page if you'd like. Would that be okay?

Amazing read. I have to say i loved the repition of the entire stanza;

"kind of wish, i kind of wish,
that the tiny dancer inside of me
could use her feet inside this cage.
do you know?"

I odnt know but it added so much depth into the poem, it helped make the flow, and rhythem great! Good hwyming as it didnt seemed forced or to cliche. I liked the neding when you again used repition which also reminded the reader about the stanza you repeated, "Do youk now", overall a very enjoyuable read! Keep them up! xx

This is a unique piece of work which doesn't surprise me I am finding by reading your work u have a very unique writting style