Comments : I'm sorry son

  • 11 years ago

    by Lollypop

    This is a sad poem, but it's really good! It kinda reminds me of my own life and what's hapened to me and my family. I gave it a 5!

  • 11 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautiful! i am glad that you are protecting your son like that. I love the last part/stanza...i'm not sure what its called! haha...but it is really good 5/5

    xoxo kisses

  • 11 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Oh wow, u kind of remind me of my mom. Oh gosh, I'm like crying. Happy tears. Kudos. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This is very heart touching. I loved how you rhymed it and everything. You told such a great story behind it! Amazing job.

  • 11 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Awww thats so sad and touching, it shows you really love your son and want to protect him, very beautiful, nice rhyme (sp?) lol loved it! Keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Thats so sad Ashlie but he will grow up and no matter what he will always love you, i just know it. he will be the man you know he can be!

  • 11 years ago

    by Roxy

    That seriously took my breathe away.
    My favorite to stanzas and the ones shown below.

    I watch you as you grow
    I know you want him around
    Every boy needs his dad
    To wrestle on the ground

    But I feared for your life
    And I feared for my death
    Now I'll be here for you
    Until my last breath

    It's so touching and wow is it deep.
    I hope your son and you are ok hun.
    xx God bless!! ^^ xx Rox..carnival will carry on

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent poem with heartfelt expressions to you child. wow :-)

  • Sad but good ~MELISSA~