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This is a sad poem, but it's really good! It kinda reminds me of my own life and what's hapened to me and my family. I gave it a 5!
by xo kisses xo
Beautiful! i am glad that you are protecting your son like that. I love the last part/stanza...i'm not sure what its called! haha...but it is really good 5/5
by Daz Mellow
Oh wow, u kind of remind me of my mom. Oh gosh, I'm like crying. Happy tears. Kudos. :)
This is very heart touching. I loved how you rhymed it and everything. You told such a great story behind it! Amazing job.
Awww thats so sad and touching, it shows you really love your son and want to protect him, very beautiful, nice rhyme (sp?) lol loved it! Keep up the good work! 5/5
by Just Lucy
Thats so sad Ashlie but he will grow up and no matter what he will always love you, i just know it. he will be the man you know he can be!
That seriously took my breathe away.
My favorite to stanzas and the ones shown below.I watch you as you grow
I know you want him around
Every boy needs his dad
To wrestle on the ground
But I feared for your life
And I feared for my death
Now I'll be here for you
Until my last breath
It's so touching and wow is it deep.
I hope your son and you are ok hun.
xx God bless!! ^^ xx Rox..carnival will carry on
Excellent poem with heartfelt expressions to you child. wow :-)
by fatal bliss is the best way to die
Sad but good ~MELISSA~