Comments : I'm Content With Losing

  • 10 years ago

    by becca

    I really love the ending to this poem because it is so powerful and meaningful. iv been reading some of your other work and you are really talented- your poems are awesome! keep it up!!! ;-)

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsey

    My heart says, "Unloved"
    My mind says, "Quit crying"
    In the end, I can't help
    But think about dying

    ^^ When I reached this part of your poem I was like "oh no the devil got a hold of another teen" but thankfully at then end your message portrayed a very positive message. I'm very glad I finished reading this whole thing and didnt stop in the middle as others would do.
    Unfortunatly there are thousands of young teens who feel like this but they are the unlucky ones because they dont know how to flip the picture over and see the brighter side. But it takes osmeone like you, who has a story ,to witness to them about being yourself and not trying to be someone your not, and please people to be someone your not. You remind me of me when I was an early teen....well like 3 years ago, You speak with such wisdom and maturity at such a young age and thats great to read/see!
    I loved this poem and the message behind it! I'll be sure to check out some more of your work!
    Chelsey

    God is love....always remember that