Comments : Bittersweet

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    What a great job you have done putting rhis to verse. So sad but the strength found at the end I love :)

    Much wiser for the wearing of my heart upon my sleeve
    I'm not the same old girl who you left there on her knees.

    I really loved these lines.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "And then you did the kindest thing, you turned and walked away
    And left me there to find the strength to face another day."

    Sometimes its the kindest thing to do to just walk away from someone and leave them be. And sometimes, they don't even realise they are being kind, they think they are causing more pain.
    But anyway, i'm rambling.
    Excellent poem as always m'dear. I don't know how you do it, but you always say so much in such few lines..
    5/5
    *Gem*