Comments : Happy Mother's Day

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sad. Good job putting your emotions to rhyme!

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Gem,

    Knowing your situation, I have a feeling this was a hard write for you. Being so far away, must be a thing that weighs heavy on your mind. Knowing she has a new family, must be even harder. You have reached within yourself and found the words you hope she is feeling towards you. I can certainly understand where you are coming from.

    Illuminati says that a mother's love cannot be erased, well, I believe a child's love for their mother can't either.

    The flow of this poem was well executed and the message was too.

    Print and send it to her. You'll be glad you did.

    Always
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    This is so sad. I know how much you miss your mom. Try picking up the phone once more. Life is to short and I hope your mom realizes this very soon.

    If I try to think back
    I remember a time
    When it used to be me
    With a cute card design

    You are always in my thoughts and prayers.
    Love your friend Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    That's sad...well wishes, it's a wonderful poem. i hope you plan on sending it to her!

    ~SSS~

  • 10 years ago

    by Marcus

    Oh honey. It's hard i know.
    But you'll always have me and that won't ever change
    I love you
    Marcus xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Gem;

    Wow hun this is so sad and broke my hearrt but then again i sorta know how you feel but in a different way. I hope your mom will see how much you miss her and will realize your her daughter and your calling out to her. its going to be hard but your strong.

    i am always here for you as you know. so keep your head high. i believe you will make it threw since you are so amazingly strong.

    great poem. and personally i think you should send it to her. it might make her see something.

    lots of love
    chelsea

  • 10 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwwww. That's soo sad! You did a wonderful job with this poem! Keep up the awesome work! Check out my poem Friendship Ring. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tayyy

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    What to say, this one makes me feel sad but yet helpless too.

    i loved the poem....could feel so much.

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awe this is a sad one Gem, but i keep feeling that you have some hope left still? ive learned that no matter how bad things are they cant stay that way forever :) one day you'll get that banquet for mothers day *wink wink* oh and the poem? 99/5 as always :P

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey Gem

    i imagine this must have been a hard write so well done!
    I cant imagine what it would be like to be in that situation so i suppose im very lucky. Just remember you are strong and there are those around you that care for you. Excellent poem.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Paula

    Hi Gem,
    I am kind of new to all this, great poem babe, i kind of know how you feel, chin up babe
    Paula x