Knowing your situation, I have a feeling this was a hard write for you. Being so far away, must be a thing that weighs heavy on your mind. Knowing she has a new family, must be even harder. You have reached within yourself and found the words you hope she is feeling towards you. I can certainly understand where you are coming from.
Illuminati says that a mother's love cannot be erased, well, I believe a child's love for their mother can't either.
The flow of this poem was well executed and the message was too.
Wow hun this is so sad and broke my hearrt but then again i sorta know how you feel but in a different way. I hope your mom will see how much you miss her and will realize your her daughter and your calling out to her. its going to be hard but your strong.
i am always here for you as you know. so keep your head high. i believe you will make it threw since you are so amazingly strong.
great poem. and personally i think you should send it to her. it might make her see something.
Awe this is a sad one Gem, but i keep feeling that you have some hope left still? ive learned that no matter how bad things are they cant stay that way forever :) one day you'll get that banquet for mothers day *wink wink* oh and the poem? 99/5 as always :P
i imagine this must have been a hard write so well done!
I cant imagine what it would be like to be in that situation so i suppose im very lucky. Just remember you are strong and there are those around you that care for you. Excellent poem.