Comments : Happy Mother's Day

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sad. Good job putting your emotions to rhyme!

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Heart


    Knowing your situation, I have a feeling this was a hard write for you. Being so far away, must be a thing that weighs heavy on your mind. Knowing she has a new family, must be even harder. You have reached within yourself and found the words you hope she is feeling towards you. I can certainly understand where you are coming from.

    Illuminati says that a mother's love cannot be erased, well, I believe a child's love for their mother can't either.

    The flow of this poem was well executed and the message was too.

    Print and send it to her. You'll be glad you did.


  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. I know how much you miss your mom. Try picking up the phone once more. Life is to short and I hope your mom realizes this very soon.

    If I try to think back
    I remember a time
    When it used to be me
    With a cute card design

    You are always in my thoughts and prayers.
    Love your friend Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    That's sad...well wishes, it's a wonderful poem. i hope you plan on sending it to her!


  • 11 years ago

    by Marcus

    Oh honey. It's hard i know.
    But you'll always have me and that won't ever change
    I love you
    Marcus xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsea


    Wow hun this is so sad and broke my hearrt but then again i sorta know how you feel but in a different way. I hope your mom will see how much you miss her and will realize your her daughter and your calling out to her. its going to be hard but your strong.

    i am always here for you as you know. so keep your head high. i believe you will make it threw since you are so amazingly strong.

    great poem. and personally i think you should send it to her. it might make her see something.

    lots of love

  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwwww. That's soo sad! You did a wonderful job with this poem! Keep up the awesome work! Check out my poem Friendship Ring. God Bless 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    What to say, this one makes me feel sad but yet helpless too.

    i loved the poem....could feel so much.

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awe this is a sad one Gem, but i keep feeling that you have some hope left still? ive learned that no matter how bad things are they cant stay that way forever :) one day you'll get that banquet for mothers day *wink wink* oh and the poem? 99/5 as always :P

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey Gem

    i imagine this must have been a hard write so well done!
    I cant imagine what it would be like to be in that situation so i suppose im very lucky. Just remember you are strong and there are those around you that care for you. Excellent poem.


  • 11 years ago

    by Paula

    Hi Gem,
    I am kind of new to all this, great poem babe, i kind of know how you feel, chin up babe
    Paula x